Overall, the feedback I got for my elevator pitch was positive. I was told not to change much so I tried to keep all the information the same. The only thing I tried to work on was speaking clearly while also keeping a good enthusiasm. I think my timing was great and I did not rush. I tried to use hand motions but being in a sling I think i did the best I could. I did not want to change much but I think i am getting close to perfecting my elevator pitch. Maybe in the future I can work on talking more about the product or how it can help consumers but i think overall I did well. I wanted to try and film this at the beach but I ran out of time. Maybe next time.
Friday, March 30, 2018
22A- Elevator Pitch #3
Overall, the feedback I got for my elevator pitch was positive. I was told not to change much so I tried to keep all the information the same. The only thing I tried to work on was speaking clearly while also keeping a good enthusiasm. I think my timing was great and I did not rush. I tried to use hand motions but being in a sling I think i did the best I could. I did not want to change much but I think i am getting close to perfecting my elevator pitch. Maybe in the future I can work on talking more about the product or how it can help consumers but i think overall I did well. I wanted to try and film this at the beach but I ran out of time. Maybe next time.
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Hey Max,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this third iteration of your elevator pitch. I really liked the idea you had of trying to record it at the beach, that would really make your elevator pitch next level! You seemed to be even more relaxed in this take. You also made good use of your hand motions despite you having one arm in a sling. Great job and I hope you recover soon!
Hello!
ReplyDeleteThis take on the elevator pitch was definitely more engaging from the start! I feel like you were more confident this take as you seemed more relaxed and spoke very clear. As Arsenio said, your use of hand motions were great regardless of the circumstances. All in all, great post and I wish you a speedy recovery!
Whatsup Max,
ReplyDeleteI think this third elevator pitch of yours is a real improvement resulting from the culmination from the feedback you've received over the course of your video projects and that the intro was very interesting and definitely hooked me as a viewer. You were very energetic and worked a lot of movement into your speech so I think you did an overall great job.