22A- Elevator Pitch #3

Overall, the feedback I got for my elevator pitch was positive.  I was told not to change much so I tried to keep all the information the same.  The only thing I tried to work on was speaking clearly while also keeping a good enthusiasm.  I think my timing was great and I did not rush.  I tried to use hand motions but being in a sling I think i did the best I could.  I did not want to change much but I think i am getting close to perfecting my elevator pitch.  Maybe in the future I can work on talking more about the product or how it can help consumers but i think overall I did well.  I wanted to try and film this at the beach but I ran out of time.  Maybe next time.